Just a heads up I released the story in first person with some names changed as an eBook. It’s available on amazon or my story. If you’ve been holding back on this because the second person didn’t jive well, this would be your chance now.
If you’ve already purchased the book and can’t access this version, in your downloads, let me know and I’ll see if I can add it. The first person edition does not have the images in it. You can still see the images in the original version and the PoC membership gallery.