My Dungeon Life – Chapter 2655-2657
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Deek makes his 17th consecutive bad idea…
I know he’s missing part of his soul, and the part I’d think has his humility, but I can’t stomach how he doesn’t ever seem to change or learn of late. He literally says he failed from overconfidence, then says he should use the Human core. Deek has seemingly gained insight into the Law of Stubbornness. He’s just reacting to everything that happens with the most extreme option, and has for a book and a half now.
Im most angry that he was told the Queen isn’t who he thinks she is, and he STILL didn’t even think twice to confirm if his plan is safe and a good idea. Especially after his series of wrong decisions. In my opinion him getting the information about th Queen should’ve never happened, because of that now he’s making an impression of being a stubborn dummy that hadn’t grown at all.
You know, honestly… I didn’t want to put any comment about the queen… the reason I did was because commenters were already guessing she was shaddy, and I felt you’d all be saying Deek was dumb when she betrayed him if he didn’t at least consider and suspect her first. So, I literally put that in so you WOULDN’T think he was dumb. I figured him enslaving her, being able to read her emotional state and mind, and finding nothig suspicious, plus the fact there was very little time to consider things, and he already had an existing animosity toward the Imperial Cloud, would be enough to excuse his mistake…
But naturally… whatever I do, Deeks an idiot. I swear, last volume, I will make him a flawless, all knowing supergod who shoots all if enemies to death with lazerbeams and I’lll get a comment:
“Ugh, Deek is so stupid. He used laserbeams on a gaseuous cloud? Explode much? I would have used super breath. He’s never going to change. He’s totally exactly the guy he was in chapter 1.” XD
I actually appreciated that part!
I get you point. Still remember I’m just a random reader who doesn’t know shit about writing anything. That one small just felt unnatural to me that’s why pointed it out. After thinking it through I get why he wouldn’t question her if he enslaved her. It was a time pressing matter.
It’s all good. I appreciate your thoughts and I try to take people’s thoughts into consideration. Thank you for reading. You guys are awesome.
I’m really curious… not trying to fight, but what “decision” would you make here? I’m the writer, and I legitimately can’t think of what is “dumb” about his conclusion. Twenty chapters ago, I had comments saying he was an idiot for NOT using the human core, now he’s an idiot for trying to use it? Mind you… that’s not even the conclusion of this chapter. The conclusion is to go home, likely consult with Elaya and Astria, two powerful sorceresses, and then proceed forward AFTER Eliza has awoken. He’s not doing it this second. He’s just come up with a plan.
I know everyone loves to call my protagonists idiots because everything doesn’t always go their way and they make mistakes, but don’t even understand what the problem is… which really makes it feel like you’re caling me the idiot, because I can’t see what is apparantly so obvious to you all, even though I wrote the damn story.
Spoiler… he never even gets close to absorbing the human core, but why is this suddenly a dumb idea when this is literally what you all been calling for the last two volumes.
Dear Whizz. I fear that, for trying to restore the Earth soul chip, which contained his memories -good and bad ones-, in order to be complete again, Richard returns, because it had merged with him. This time make him a sex playthin for male orcs. Please.
I really want to see what you all say next chapter… Imma go write it now.
I’m guessing Deek’s plan to use the Human Core goes very badly.
What do I win?
What puzzles me is that he doesn’t strongly resent the loss of Alysia. I think I understand it’s because he lost a part of his soul. It’s hard, but maybe that’s the reason. Deek is slowly losing himself. I hope he can recover what he no longer has, but I also understand that there are some things that, once lost, there’s no way to get them back. The story is getting very bittersweet, but I still like it 😀
Apparently because she was lost from his soul so it may be severely blunted. Kinda like how he lost his feelings for earth. Like he still has a shed from her last words.
I honestly love the story and it shows despite how strong deek grown he can make mistakes the negative reviews from the fans tho are most people hate seeing the person there invested in fall to a lower point lose strength or people.
He’ll even I feel the same honestly but as a fan and follower look forward to see how you will restore deek to full strength